professional feedback

On wednesday 6th april I had a professional film producer have a look at my work and to give me some feedback on what worked well and what didn't. He said that I needed more footage for certain bits and needed to get rid of some of the text. He also told me that I needed to increase the volume of the dialogue and lower the volume of the sound track as he found it hard to hear some of the dialogue but apart from that he said he liked it.